For me, writing in English is like cooking. I mean, is something that I like to do but I usually make a lot of mistakes. Nevertheless, I still wanna try it as many times as I can.
Writing is Spanish is like having a day for my own, where I can do whatever I want and feel free about doing it. I can feel sad and cry, go to the movies and spent all my money buying things.It is for me like the best day ever.
Writing in french is like the feeling of when you have a relationship with someone and you love that person, but that person do something awful to you, and no matter how hard it was, you forgive him and start all over again. You just love him.
I like french as much as I like English and Spanish, is just that my grammar is not the best one. But I am trying a new idea, leaving those awful texts in the past and starting again with new ideas, because I found out that I love writing no matter the language is.
I liked the way you express your ideas in this text. It makes me feel like I'm speaking with you because I can see you in this text. I don't have too many critiques about this, I'm not pretty sure about the part when you say "like having a day for my own" if it is "on my own" or for my own", so that's something I think you should look for or if you're sure about it is ok.
ReplyDeleteThen there is this part when you say "is like the feeling of when you have" is the same, I feel like there must be another way to say that to make the reader understand it in a better way.
Finally, I liked the conclusion because I feel like it is related to mine. I mean writing is a hard process in any language and you just have to try and maybe you get to love it as you said.
Thank you my friend it's true. I should say " a day on my own". The other idea it's not well written because there isn't suposse to be "the feeling of". So thank you for helping me.
ReplyDeleteFor me, writing in English is like cooking. I mean, is something that I like to do but I usually make a lot of mistakes. Nevertheless, I still wanna try it as many times as I can.
ReplyDeleteWriting is Spanish is like having a day on my own, where I can do whatever I want and feel free about doing it. I can feel sad and cry, go to the movies and spent all my money buying things.It is for me like the best day ever.
Writing in french is like the feeling when you have a relationship with someone and you love that person, but that person do something awful to you, and no matter how hard it was, you forgive him and start all over again. You just love him.
I like french as much as I like English and Spanish, is just that my grammar is not the best one. But I am trying a new idea, leaving those awful texts in the past and starting again with new ideas, because I found out that I love writing no matter the language is.