Universidad
del Valle
Licenciatura
en Lenguas Extranjeras
Composición
escrita en Inglés VII
Profesora: Sol colmenares
Estudiante:
Leidy Yareth Martínez López
Critical review of the
introduction of “CRITICAL PERIOD IN SECOND LANGUAGE ACQUISITION”
I would like to set first the topic I am going to talk
about; it is the theory of critical period in learning a second language. I
chose this topic because I believe this is vastly but not completely developed
issue in learning a second language and it could generate some ideas about how
to improve learning a new language in adults and how different could it be from
children. I found that some experts have made lots of research about the
critical period but they argued that this period could end at different ages. I
will mention those experts and the time in life they believe the critical
period concludes later.
In my text I have selected just the introduction of a
study made in the United States by Kenji Hakuta, Ellen Bialystok and Edward
Wiley. I decided to analyze only the introduction because this presents for me
the base of the research and I would be very difficult to develop the whole
work.
This critical review is addressed basically to people
who is interested on knowing more about learning processes or learning styles
if I can put it in that way. However the topic could be interesting for the
whole educative community of Second Language Learning and Teaching.
The main purpose of this review is to show the
perspective of the mentioned authors about the critical period and my point of
view in front of the ideas they present. Besides, I would like to know more
about the critical period hypothesis because it can help me understanding my
future students’ needs according to their age or cognitive development.
The authors argue that the idea that there is a
biologically-based critical period for second-language acquisition has appeal
to both theorists and social policymakers. That is, language policy has been
developed according to this kind of hypothesis and theorists have been looking
for a definite answer to this phenomenon.
They also refer to the field in which that hypothesis appeared firstly,
it was in neurolinguistic literature by Penfield and Roberts (1959). They speculated
that the lack of recoveries from traumas and damages in the brain because of
the maturity could go on until second language acquisition.
In this research the authors expressed that the
results of the test they applied demonstrated that proficiency scores declined
with increases in age of initial exposure to the second language. Nevertheless,
they did not find any specific sign that can lead to the idea that in fact
there is a specific age until people can learn or not a new language. In fact
they always talk about acquisition because they have focused on immigrants who
are supposed to have acquired the second language instead of have learned it
consciously.
These researchers say that the claim that there is an
age-related decline in the success with which individuals master a second
language is not controversial, and they expose two characteristics that are
presented must present a critical period: (1) high level of preparedness for
learning within a specified developmental period to assure the domain is
mastered by the species, and (2) lack of preparedness outside of this period. I
would like to say that the second point for the critical period is a theory
that involves not only learning a second languge but, learning in a more
general way. In other words that would mean that children or young people, each
theorist has exposed a different limit in age, are more prepared to face a
learning process than we adults are.
Then, the text shows that there have been several
theorists who have tried to develop the critical period hypotheses. Ones of
them is Johnson and Newport (1989, 1991) who said that there is a strong
age-related decline in proficiency for languages learned prior to puberty
(defined as 15 years old) and random variation in achievement among those who
are exposed to a second language later in life.
As these scientists, some others have presented a limit of age in which
the critical period ends. That is the case of Krashen (1973) who argues that
period ends at 5; Pinker (1994) says it is at 6; Lenneberg (1967) says it is at
12 and, as I have already mentioned, Johnson and Newport (1989) say it is at
15. So my idea by doing this exercise was precisely to show that there is one
hypothesis but the issues, or at least the most important issue is the age in
which it is supposed the brain have more difficulties to learn is not clear
yet.
What I agree with the authors is that they realized
that within the context they studied it is necessary to categorize or have in
mind that there are social factors that can easily influence second-language
acquisition, the age a one factor but the educative development, language
policies within the society, interest or goals sought by the learners are
determinant factors in that process.
Finally, the authors say that they will examine the effect of age of
acquisition on second-language proficiency by studying a very large sample of
second- language learners who cover a wide range of ages of initial exposure to
English. Probably the rate in which Critical period stops is
not going to be found at the end of this project because the factor of age
and brain maturity is not the only factor that counts in learning a new
language process. In fact, as I see it, it is just one of the variants that impinge
that process and I would not label any of variants or factors as the most
important in that enterprise.
http://www.stanford.edu/~hakuta/www/docs/CriticalEvidence.pdf
ReplyDeleteNaty, this is the site where I found the thesis of which I made the critical review. Remember I dit it only with the introduction
When you said "would be very difficult to develop the whole work". It is not good to say something like that because it will take away credibility to your text. Also, when you announce the possible audience of your text you should not say "if I can put it in that way". It is the same issue that I talk above
ReplyDeleteAnother thing that I saw is that sometimes you repeat some words many times, like in this example: "The authors argue that the idea that there is a biologically-based critical period". They are too many that.
Finally, I think you need to re-read it and try to organize your ideas in specific paragraphs, this would help you have a more detailed and organized text. If there is anything else that you want to ask me, do not doubt it.